The ____ is like a one way highway,
never ending rapids of water going on
to a distinct location.
two sides are called
silence
and one is called deadly
the other side is peaceful.
while the other side is waiting for an opportunity.
silence
and one is called deadly
the other side is peaceful.
while the other side is waiting for an opportunity.
Great poem Neil!. I'm guessing what your talking about is a river or some other body of water. A couple of grammar mistakes like "two sides are called silence", unless you meant to say that in which case never mind. It's not long which adds to how good it is. Great use of similes and overall a well done poem.
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